As a nursing student, you’re not just learning facts—you’re learning to think like a nurse. This means going beyond simply describing information to critically engaging with it. Critical writing is an essential skill in nursing education because it shows your ability to analyse, evaluate, make connections between ideas, and apply knowledge to real-world situations.
Think of descriptive writing as "What?" and critical writing as "So what?" and "What next?"
Feature | Descriptive writing | Critical writing |
Purpose | To inform or describe | To analyse, evaluate, and interpret |
Focus | States and explains what happened | Identifies the significance of what happened and questions existing explanations of a situation and examines alternative explanations |
Structure | Presents information in sequence | Organises information around ideas, arguments or questions |
Evidence | Lists ideas or perspectives on the topic from various experts |
Evaluates the strengths and weakness of the evidence supporting the theory or argument. Explains how ideas or perspectives are connected to each other and to the overall topic |
Outcomes | Gives options | Evaluates the various options and explains which option is best and why |
The following paragraphs compare one which uses descriptive writing to describe a situation. The second paragraph has been rewritten to include the writer's critical analysis of the situation.
The patient was admitted with shortness of breath and a productive cough. On examination, she had a fever of 38.5°C, and her respiratory rate was 24 breaths per minute. A chest X-ray showed consolidation in the right lower lobe. The patient was started on IV antibiotics and was monitored regularly.
The patient's symptoms and diagnostic findings indicate a likely diagnosis of community-acquired pneumonia. The elevated temperature and increased respiratory rate are typical of an inflammatory response. Consolidation seen on the X-ray further supports this diagnosis. Early initiation of IV antibiotics aligns with clinical guidelines, which emphasise prompt treatment to reduce the risk of complications. Continued monitoring is essential to assess treatment effectiveness and detect potential deterioration.
Critical writing isn’t about being negative—it’s about thinking deeply. It shows that you understand not just what’s happening in nursing practice, but why it matters. With practice, your writing will become more confident and insightful—just like your clinical skills!
Thank you to the team at University of Technology Sydney who gave us permission to adapt and use their guide on How to write critically